Two Mediocre Stories Delivered Poorly

Review of Sea Wall by Simon Steven and A Life by Nick Payne

The stories here were okay, and may have seemed better to me had I read them in print. Hard to say.
“Sea Wall” felt like the ramblings of a drunk who can’t help but make the most important event of his life sound dull. The narrator is a dick, which is okay but he couldn’t even ben an interesting one.
“A Life” was a bit more enjoyable though trying to address a common trope (death and birth intertwined) by leaping back and forth between two narratives. The plot is a little confusing at times, but the story resolves satisfactorily.
The two good actors reading here may have hurt the delivery of the stories, but that might be a matter of direction. I don’t know. What I do know is that I did not enjoy either of these stories as much as I think I should have. At this point, I certainly have no interest in re-experiencing either.

 

Michael Neal Morris teaches English at Eastfield College and is the author of Based on Imaginary Events, Release, Music for Arguments, and other books. A book of prose poems (for now, dimly) is forthcoming from Faerie Treehouse Collective. His poems and stories have been published in both traditional print journals and online magazines. He lives with his wife, children, and two snarky cats outside the Dallas area.

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